This is my first game, I would much appreciate feedback so i can improve

StatusIn development
PlatformsHTML5
Rating
Rated 4.0 out of 5 stars
(1 total ratings)
AuthorCoolGuyAdam
Made withConstruct
TagsHorror

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Its pretty cool but i noticed that the text didn't appear on the screen long enough for me to read so i kinda missed out on  the story. Bit confused why i was teleporting randomly and the jump scares were a bit meh.


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I feel like what has been said is pretty good for narrative, remember with horror jump scares are great but you also need to build suspense sometimes. Use of sound, music and time will help build that tension.

Technically speaking, you might want to create a sprite looking to one side or the other and animate it for walking then mirror flip it if they go the other direction. This way it looks more like the character is walking and not gliding. Also oddly the demon sounds like they are speaking Japanese? lol... Anyway great job for a first attempt game! Color me impressed! Keep up the great work!

Thank you, I will take this advice on board

the jumpscares didnt get me, but i just dont get scared easily, when the character started flying around the room i was a bit confused but overall a good game, if a full game was made i would play it. Ludwig short LULW

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Really great for a first game :) Got a nice little story, actual jumpscares - good stuff :)

Thank you

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I actually gotten jumpscared by that game.

it was short and can have exploration, but it seemed that the game is rushing.

if you aimed for this to be a horror, you've done a good job jumpscaring me the first time.

Thank you

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Sick

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